Taylon / message me / 22 Jan 10 19:13

As it stands, it looks a little too much like it was done in powerpoint.

The biggest problem is that my competitor uses an almost identical 4 square (to form a window) pattern and I don't want to copy his idea

dsprod / message me / 22 Jan 10 8:31

I wanted to post what I had to try to get some feedback. The phone number, web address, and tag line will change along with some highlights and reflections.

Just wanted to get an idea if I'm heading in the right direction.

David